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Aeryn and Deogol

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My OCs Aeryn and Deogol

Tools:
Derwent Studio colored pencils, 0.35 mechanichal pencil



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Make
HP
Model
HP pstc4200
Date Taken
Dec 6, 2011, 8:33:20 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

You have a very good intuition for the small details, like the curled toes and the placement of hair strands. It really adds interest and makes it feel more natural. Great use of negative space and nice movement with the flowing cloth and angles of her limbs. The expressions are believable as well.

The only thing I would say you could work on is depth. This is all, for the most part, very lightly shaded--which could be a style choice, I realize, but even still, areas like his torso under her knee, her torso under his head, and the arrow holder could use more attention. The form of the folds and the woman's body are believable, but the other forms are more flat. One area in particular is where the arrows go into their container; I can't really distinguish between the individual arrows.