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Tori by Adorael Tori by Adorael
Early concept of my OC Tori for a fantasy novel I am writing. She is going to look for her home world though she needs to learn to appreciate what she already has :heart:


I have a traditional drawing of her too, I might scan and submit that sometime.
While drawing her I decided to redo her clothes but I was too far along so, another time  kaomoji set 2 56/67 


More digital art by me:
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:iconaudreydlw:
Magnifique, les couleurs, Le seul reproche que je ferais serait au niveau du front un chouya trop grand. Sinon bravo !!
C'est une jeune fille jolie , pas parfaite mais jolie et celà çà me plait ce naturel.On aimerait connaître son histoire et le pourquoi de ce ruban qui semble être un ruban de cérémonie.
Magnificent, good colors, only reproach which I would make would be at the level of the forehead a little too big. Otherwise bravossimo!! It is an attractive, not perfect but attractive girl and this, this, this pleases me this nature. We would like to know her story and why of this ribbon which seems to be a ribbon of ceremony. Sorry for my poor english. ^^ Good work in resume.
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Cool concept piece, it's definitely sparked my curiosity about the character.

The headband does feel a little random, at least the way it's presented here at this point. I don't feel like it's really telling me anything about the character, other than maybe she likes to dress a little funny at times.

I like the pose you gave her for this portrait, looking and facing off the side rather than toward the viewer. Gives me the sense that she's up to something. Since you only did a portrait here, if you want to develop the character further, you'll want to do a full body-length drawing at some point, but I'm sure you're well aware of that.

Your technique with the drawing looks pretty good to me, nice colors and painting. I love the shape or her face. My major concern here is since the headband is partially hiding her brows, it's a little hard to tell if the proportions of the face might be a little funky. I wonder if her brow-line might be a little too high.

Keep up the good work!
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lenny2055 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Thanks for the Favorite
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lenny2055 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
such a wonderful picture.
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:iconmysterysneeze:
mysterysneeze Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2016
Good luck with the story you are making! Great character design :)
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:icondragonbud290:
dragonbud290 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful! I love it!
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FriskTheDreemurr Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Tori is s lovely name, the art even lovelier ~
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:iconperenken:
Perenken Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016
Very beautifull!!!!! 
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:iconpop-a-wheelie:
pop-a-wheelie Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2016   General Artist
all of your art it great!!
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ViikingitValk Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd certainly love to see more of her, she seems to be really an interesting character. And how about the novel, are you planning publishig it? :)
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:iconsabrinaamatistakaila:
SabrinaAmatistaKaila Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2016  Student Artist
i think im going to marry her
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:icontrinioly:
trinioly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016
she is so cute :)  i like her hair :)
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:icon3dmacphee:
3DMacPhee Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2015
When I see art like this, OMG!!!!! I wish I didn't skip 35 years of my life not doing any graphic art.
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:iconrbak923:
rbak923 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2015
Beautiful, can't believe how talented you are!!
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:iconedlima3:
EDLima3 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Such fine detail and graceful style! Truly EXCELLENT WORK!!
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:iconteuli:
Teuli Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing brush technique!
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:icongzhatsk:
gzhatsk Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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:icongoatllama:
Goatllama Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So glad this is OC. So many times I click on something thinking "ah, what an original character design!" and am then disappointed to find out that I just need to broaden my horizons. Any teasers for the novel or is it still a work in progress at this point?
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:iconmonikatom:
monikatom Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
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:icontanithlipsky:
TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015
nice
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:iconrynnabelle:
Rynnabelle Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I love this! You chose great contrast colors, and it kinda reminds me of Christmas :) I like how her hair is very similar colors to the red in her dress, but is different! For me, personally, I think the only thing I'm not a giant fan of is the sketch lines. It gives depth, but it's a scratchy way that I never personally like. 
All in all, it looks frekin awesome!
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CodyArts85 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
amazing paint :)
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:iconmartinamoonlight:
MartinaMoonlight Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2015   General Artist
I think your character is veeeeery likable and I like your style and how you use colours. You should watch the perspective a little though. Just a slight correction of the nose or/and lips should do it. Or a facial shading if this is an intended smile:)  Best of luck with your novel.
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aili-x Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
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freddie64 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
Awesome work
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:iconchanceofpie:
ChanceofPie Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, she is beautiful! I like her a lot. Also, my name is Tori. ^^' 
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AquaDreamStudios Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I love this picture :)
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Nathan-R Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The traditional one would interest me heaps!, you've really done great, you've allowed for the clothing to fold correctly in place corresponding to her body shape and the face is done with style and license love it when you apply that over anything else Adorael
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:iconkeremgo4d:
keremgo4d Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015
So cute...
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:iconamy-wednesdayschild:
amy-WednesdaysChild Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice.
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YolieDecarte Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015
Magnifique, j'adore,
merci pour le favoris,
belle fin de journée
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oridonat Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015  Professional Artist
LOVIT!
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laurentdls Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
AMAZING :D... love the brush strokes and the colors used.. :D
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:icongalalis:
GalaLis Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015
very nice
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:iconlocaxgrave:
locaxgrave Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2015
she reminds me with my love
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:icondrowoutpost:
DrowOutpost Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015
What a character! Very inspiring.
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:iconthevoi:
thevoi Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015
Wow!
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:iconbenjaminossoff:
BenjaminOssoff Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pretty!
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RoyalTear Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015  Student General Artist
Beautiful!
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Ennethrill123 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015
precioso! me encanta la expresividad que le das, el color, la luz, que alegría de creación!!!! <3
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Veguitarat Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Professional Writer
There is an actress on the Animal Planet show "Ice Lake Rebels" named Allyce who to me is the RL doppleganger of Tori.Has the same fun/innocence/deer-in-the-headlights look (and this is my fav piece of yours). The problem is the rural an young lady has a specific speach impediment that is all I can hear when I look at this now. Half way between endearing and irritating. Would be interesting if you agree.
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SephArts Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
She's so beautifuul *^*I really like her haircut :3
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Eloryas Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015
YOur colors are awsome
I love it
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
Nice :)
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:iconkrikachu:
krikachu Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Professional Artist
Refreshing - and tender
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dotnetperl5 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
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emmanuelmariere Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Nice
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:icontoriadora:
ToriAdora Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, look what I´ve found, another Tori. Hehe.
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JonPastool Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool picture, I love this
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Hitspinner Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Professional General Artist
You are an excellent illustrator. That is the only critique you need.  Best of luck and success :)
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:iconcarmenacisnadean:
CarmenACisnadean Featured By Owner May 16, 2015
So beautiful! It is very lovely.
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Catmandolin Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I really should start trying to paint more--she is beautiful.
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